Anarchyte ( work | talk) 09:01, 27 October 2016 (UTC) External links Ī (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): Anarchyte ( work | talk) 08:54, 27 October 2016 (UTC) Done. Cognissonance ( talk) 08:45, 27 October 2016 (UTC) Ah ok. As was done in Far Harbor, the word " said" needs to be reworded with more synonyms, per User:Mike Christie/Copyediting reception sections. Stuff like "Bob Fekete (iDigitalTimes) said", "Davide Ambrosiani (IGN) said" and "Juan Garcia (IGN) said" needs to be reworded with more variety.The different platform scores are elaborated on in the next sentence. "The releases of Nuka-World" - Simply say " Nuka-World".I'll remove one of them from the template. As a reader, it could easily be confusing. They add content to the article and I see no reason to remove Anarchyte: I don't see the use for two XONE scores though. This is an English article about an American video game. Remove the Spanish and Italian IGN scores.The section could also do well with being written in the past tense.I'd like this article to be consistent with the other expansion pack article ( Far Harbor), so I'm going to leave them in parentheses. Instead of putting the publications in parentheses, write it in prose."(in order of release)" - Not necessary."The ability to swap between first-person and third-person perspectives is available in both the expansion and the original version" - Move up so that it follows the first sentence."The Pip-Boy, a small computer strapped to the character's wrist which contains maps, statistics, data, and items, plays a role" - Simplify: "The Pip-Boy – a small computer strapped to the character's wrist which contains maps, statistics, data, and items – plays a role"."new enemies and more powerful versions of existing enemies" - Minimize repetition: "new enemies and more powerful versions of existing ones"."and upon arrival, they are dropped" - Improve flow: "and upon arrival are dropped"."It is the territory of raiders," - Clarify: " Nuka-World is the territory of raiders "."Nuka-World is an expansion pack for the post-apocalyptic action role-playing single-player video game Fallout 4" - Coincide genres with lead."with reviewers praising the new locations, but they compared" - Improve flow: "with reviewers praising the new locations, but comparing"."The expansion received a mostly positive reception" - Minimize repetition and correct: " Fallout 4: Nuka-World received both a positive and mixed response"."Development of this expansion was confirmed" - Minimize repetition: "Development was confirmed"."found in Fallout 4's code" - Clarify: "found in Fallout 4's source code".Cognissonance ( talk) 22:11, 25 October 2016 (UTC) Lead Why do I always mistake Fallout for BioShock. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Fallout 4: Nuka-World/GA1. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Fallout 4: Nuka-World.
#Fallout 4 nuka world code#
that a reference to "DLCNukaWorld.esm" in the source code of Fallout 4 led to rumors of Fallout 4: Nuka-World months before its announcement?Ī record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2016/September. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article.Ī fact from Fallout 4: Nuka-World appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 6 September 2016 ( check views). ( rev)įallout 4: Nuka-World received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which is now archived.